Thursday, March 8, 2007

Toefl

There many benefits you got when you take the Toefl test and get the score of pass. Firstly, if you want to take the Toefl and pass it, you have to learn all of the skills of English. For example, you will learn how to write perfectly, how to read in English and practice yourself in the listening and speaking; if you have learned all of these skills in English that means you have made your self ready to take the Toefl test. Secondly, you must take this test and pass it if you are an international student and want to attend any college in the States. In addition, there are different requirement of scores for each university. When you apply for a company to work in and you have passed the Toefl, that make your acceptance to attend working in the company easier, that happens a lot in my country because the owners of the companies are trying to make the employment with good English for communicating with foreign companies. Finally, I would like to say that there good chances of study and work you get them if you pass the Toefl.

1 comment:

Derek said...

Hi Mohammed,

Thanks for writing the paragraph; however, you only had to do an outline.

I want you to look at the topic sentence. Your topic sentence doesn't really describe the content of your paragraph. All of the ideas in your paragraph need to support the topic. For example, you mention 'benefits' as the topic of your paragraph, but your first support is the requirements one needs to pass the test. This, obviously, is not a benefit. How can you change the topic to fit the content of the paragraph?

Have a great break and remember webex on Monday 3/19 at 10:00